Thursday, November 6, 2008

Sentence Composing #7-practice 2

Practice 2:
-Model: delayed adverb-visibly
-When she told him, she tried to excuse herself a bit, lamely.
-When he saw her, he smiled widely, excitedly.

Practice 3:
-Model: delayed adverbs-slowly and evenly
-She crossed Washington Avenue, purposefully and confidently.
-The bikers biked on Hynes Avenue, quickly and efficiently.

Practice 4:
1.-
Model: delayed adverb-slowly
-Sample: delayed adverb-triumphantly
-Completely done, Sally raised her hand confidently.
2.-Model: delayed adverb-quietly
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Sample: delayed adverb-dreamily
-We hiked in the forest, nervously, where the trees swayed in the wind and made noises through the jet black sky.
3.-Model: delayed adverb-heavily
-Sample: delayed adverb-desperately
-The man was talking, quickly, with the two men, after a loud booming sound, his try was no use, it was already to late.

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